Shop Forum More Submit  Join Login
About Literature / Hobbyist CommanderhurtzUnited States Recent Activity
Deviant for 7 Years
Needs Core Membership
Statistics 278 Deviations 28,629 Comments 47,488 Pageviews
×

Newest Deviations

Mature content
(18+) Mature RP wanted! (Closed, again) :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 6 11
Male human by RachelNeko! by Commanderhurtz Male human by RachelNeko! :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 3 8 Tiger Shark by PrirnRose! by Commanderhurtz Tiger Shark by PrirnRose! :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 2 11 Adoptable by xNeonshadow21! by Commanderhurtz Adoptable by xNeonshadow21! :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 0 2 The peaceful prisoner! by Commanderhurtz The peaceful prisoner! :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 4 2 Old adopt! by Commanderhurtz Old adopt! :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 2 14 Space dragon adopt! by Commanderhurtz Space dragon adopt! :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 4 6 Because I have nothing else better to do. by Commanderhurtz Because I have nothing else better to do. :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 1 30
Literature
ABYS series- Part five- Keeping the RP going!
Hello everyone! Good day! Within this part, I will be discussing how to keep a RP/Role play going. Ever since part four, I have been thinking hard on this, how to word it, examples, etc. So without further hesitation, let's get into it!
Okay, so you have gotten your role play partner, got your characters, plot, theme, story, etc down, you've been playing for a bit...But have you lost momentum or 'steam' to play further? I myself have seen this many times in other role players, including myself. Get a strong start, the characters are IDEAL for each other in a story sense, the problem/villain is well fleshed out, everything is good! Or is it? For people it's often starting a role play they at first have problems with, then keeping it going. 
Keeping a role play going after starting is sometimes a difficult task, either for the writers or actually indeed for the characters in the play. The best example to say or show is the 'Meet on the street' or 'Meet in the forest' start ups. Whil
:iconCommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz
:iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 0 0
Succubus egg adopt by Commanderhurtz Succubus egg adopt :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 3 2
Literature
ABYS series- Part four - Meeting of the characters
Hello, hola, Gutan tag! Welcome to ABYS, 'Advice because you suck' part four! In this part, we'll be talking meeting of the characters, be it roleplay or novel like. This will be more geared toward roleplaying, but it should work none the less. In the last part, we talked about starting our roleplay/story, after we (And by we I actually mean you) talked over the story and the idea, got it started with the starting message/details. Well, you've started, but have the characters met? Or rather have they met in a fashion you find 'cool' or exciting? 
If you answered yes, rock on! If not...Well fear not! Alright, so the introduction to the story has been made, either about a small town atop a snowy mountain, a grotto of rich gold to be discovered under the desert sand, but you're confused on how the characters meet? Based upon many introductions I have done personally, the most common is meeting in a forest road or meeting with the street of a certain city, which is pretty mediocre. Me
:iconCommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz
:iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 1 2
Literature
ABYS series- Part three - Effective RP starters.
Guten tag! German for 'Good day', free language advice! Jokes aside, welcome to part three of ABYS, 'advice because you suck'. In this part of this lovely and entertaining piece, we'll be discussing effective RP starters, or perhaps 'Starting tactics'.
So you found your partner, maybe it was a friend, a random acquaintance, etc. Now that you found your partner, perhaps discussed an idea and story plot, what do you do now? This varies from player to player, though in my personal experience, it is good to first ask whom is going to drive the role play like I said in part two.
Some people don't bother with deciding whom drives, they get creative, write up a starter, and then the play begins! Not always is that the case for all players, if it was, this would be a mighty short part.
Because I see this as the most common, yet there is nothing wrong with this, I'm going to use a romance role play mixed with fantasy and perhaps...Adventure as an example while I talk. Alright, so let's pretend
:iconCommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz
:iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 1 0
Creature Chick Adopt by Commanderhurtz Creature Chick Adopt :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 1 5
Literature
ABYS series- Part two - Finding a role play.
Hello everyone! Welcome to part two of ABYS, 'Advice because you suck'. In this part, we will be discussing, reviewing, reading, etc about how to find a Role play. Player Conduct almost won being written instead of this topic, though you must find a Role play to even have conduct in one, yes? So let's begin!
Finding a Role play can be difficult or easy depending on what you are searching for, it depends on what you are trying to find. Briefly I will explain what a role play is, as that is just as important to know.
A role play in it's most simplest form is usually two or more people playing a 'Character', using the character's skills, personality, background, etc to play through a designed plot and theme. Now to begin with finding a role play, you may already have a character and want to use them in a certain plot, or you intend to make one depending on the vibe it's going with.
Some people actually seek to use characters from famous books, films, or games. Like Captain America from Th
:iconCommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz
:iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 2 2
Literature
ABYS series- Part one - Introduction.
Hello everyone! Welcome to ABYS, 'Advice because you suck'. After years and years of role playing here on DA or other places, I have decided to try and help people who maybe confused on how to RP or are frankly tired of the same thing over and over.
Please be aware that the title is not mean't to offend or suggest that I am a better writer then you (The reader), it is mean't to be funny. I'm a self proclaimed hobby writer whom often keeps his work private but am willing to share honest data and advice for whomever may need it.
While I would LOVE to get right into the advice, some people like to know more about the writer they're reading from. So here is a brief introduction of myself. I'm a young man within my twenties as of the time I post this. I have had a 'series' idea for a novel ever since I was about four years old, working on and off it for a VERY long time.
When I was born, I had very horrible breathing and hearing problems, I had a difficult time communicating, understanding,
:iconCommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz
:iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 1 0
Kilkina! (Mew mew adopts) by Commanderhurtz Kilkina! (Mew mew adopts) :iconcommanderhurtz:Commanderhurtz 3 0
Stories, art, and other things. Most 'art' that isn't traditional made was made by other people for me via request or commission. Thank you for checking out my gallery!

Random Favourites

CWC-Turmoil-100th Deviation by ActorzInc CWC-Turmoil-100th Deviation :iconactorzinc:ActorzInc 47 46 Mecha - Gin Matsuba by ModalMechanica Mecha - Gin Matsuba :iconmodalmechanica:ModalMechanica 197 54 HoC - Urvogel by grid-gunner HoC - Urvogel :icongrid-gunner:grid-gunner 334 58 Hesperus Harlequin by Tabnir Hesperus Harlequin :icontabnir:Tabnir 678 59 Partners In Crime by squeedgemonster Partners In Crime :iconsqueedgemonster:squeedgemonster 2,124 205 The Journey Begins - by DanLuVisiArt The Journey Begins - :icondanluvisiart:DanLuVisiArt 3,321 535 LMS - GABRIEL - UNLOADED by DanLuVisiArt LMS - GABRIEL - UNLOADED :icondanluvisiart:DanLuVisiArt 10,599 933 assassins creed by DXSinfinite assassins creed :icondxsinfinite:DXSinfinite 6,013 478 Cowboy by McNolo Cowboy :iconmcnolo:McNolo 10 16 Cowboy by LauraTolton Cowboy :iconlauratolton:LauraTolton 182 17 Cowboy by bluekensou Cowboy :iconbluekensou:bluekensou 21 6 Ninja-Cowboy 001 by Shun-008 Ninja-Cowboy 001 :iconshun-008:Shun-008 883 111 :cowboy: by dutchie17 :cowboy: :icondutchie17:dutchie17 135 37 Anthro Deinonychus by DrakainaQueen Anthro Deinonychus :icondrakainaqueen:DrakainaQueen 241 78 Night Raid by JasonEngle Night Raid :iconjasonengle:JasonEngle 540 10
My faves. Enjoy.

Critiques


Where to start? Oh let me start by saying, since this is my commission, I'm going to be VERY biased in my ratings (5/5 FTW!!!). I'm goi...

Hi

This my friends, this is the best nude drawing I have EVER seen. My friend Crazyabby2012 has put even leonardo Da vinci out of his pace...


Quick summery, I love it and it looks awesome. The long answer is, whoa! If it's not the shading, coloration, facial expressions or cla...

Donate

Commanderhurtz has started a donation pool!
139 / 1,000
Gathering points for premium membership or this is for payment from commissions.

20 To 25:iconpointsplz: for a info sheet of one of your characters (in writing)- Example : commanderhurtz.deviantart.com/…

What I will not do -> Porn, gore, things with alot of inappropriate words or content.

Also the time of payment is negotiable, and I work for your specifications, the final product I write for you is at your request. I also prefer alot to write the commission on Piratepad or Titanpad, so that you are satisfied with what you get before it is finished.

Current commissions->

1. -Now available!-
2. -Now available!-
3. -Now available!-

You must be logged in to donate.
  • Anonymous
    Anonymous Deviant
    Donated Jul 19, 2014, 11:01:43 AM
    12
Hey everyone! How are you all? I recently put out a journal to do a few RP's, and I've been swamped by the amount of notes and messages I have been getting...Never expected that many! I've had to cycle through a lot and very sorry if I couldin't get to everyone. Very sorry again and hope you all have a great week!

deviantID

Commanderhurtz's Profile Picture
Commanderhurtz

Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
United States
Very quick summery of stats->

First name : Benjamin (Can call me Ben, Benja, etc)
Age : Would rather not tell unless I know you.
Relationship status : Taken
--------------------------------
I have been on DA for about six years and appreciate clean artist and respectable people. I write and occasionally color line art, and I usually love to play a lot of video games and role play my characters. I usually don't reveal my full real name or my age unless I know or trust the person I am speaking to.

Many people misunderstand how I speak, or don't understand my morality. I prefer to speak on a professional and 'intelligent' level, using correct punctuation and not using internet language. I do not like heated words, name calling, or arguments. If you have a question or opinion, say it logically and clear. I will not tolerate trolls and foul mouths.

Also, I do not like religious discussions unless both parties are opened minded individuals. I don't care what side you're on, I don't like people bull dozing their ways onto me, as I do not do it to them. I do not appreciate sexism at all, I have equality for males and females both, I do not consider a person's genitalia a tall tale sign of how they're going to be or treat me, nor will I be prejudiced against anyone is of the same or opposite gender to me. I also request this respect in return. (Had to add due to previous experiences)

Thank you for reading.

Likes : Chocolate, Rootbeer, Video games, History, Philosophy, Nice people, open mindedness, God, Firearms.

Dislikes : Close minded people, Onions, people whom use the phrase "I'm not interested" or "I'm not a fan of" constantly (Ask me about this one), Arrogance, trolling, rudeness.


Favorite quotes -> "It is not sufficient that I succeed, all others must fail"-Genghis Khan.


"If you know your enemy, and you know yourself, you need not fear the result of one hundred battles".- Sun tzu.

"It is easy to conquer a nation on Horseback, difficult to dismount that horse and Govern it"-Genghis Khan.

"I pledge allegiance to the flag, and to the United states of America. One nation, under god, indivisible, liberty and justice for all"-The United states Pledge of allegiance.

Since everyone else is doing it and showing them off, I too am doing stamps! Enjoy, or don't, whichever! ->

American Flag Stamp by xxstamps Respect-Stamp by Dinoclaws Actions speak-Stamp by Dinoclaws

Judging-Stamp by Dinoclaws Say things straight-Stamp by Dinoclaws I am picky-Stamp by Dinoclaws

Stamp: Respect by Jammerlee I Am Me. by ImFeelingStampity Be the Change... by ImFeelingStampity

Beauty... by ImFeelingStampity let's not be fake by stormbound I Support My Right To Rant by Foxxie-Chan

Respect is EARNED stamp by a-stamp-account Respect History Stamp by sugaredheart So Many Books by LaPurr

I support writing English by FragileReveries Think before you type stamp by andaria I imagine with music Stamp by tastelessfate

NO SMOKE STAMP by schtolz ::Respect:: by mimblewimble Missed the Point Stamp by In-The-Zone

I Support...My Friends - Stamp by Zooky Respect Animals Stamp by mylastel Every Morning... by mylastel

Stamp-Christian Scientist by Jazzy-C-Oaks Stamp-Disagree But Not Hate by Jazzy-C-Oaks I Wanna Be Happy Stamp by mylastel

aTRUEfriend by mylastel This Mindset... by mylastel Know Me Better Stamp by mylastel

Character and Reputation Stamp by mylastel The Ugly Truth Stamp by mylastel So what is love? by XxDiaLinnxX

:thumb178691687: Jesus.. Stamp by Fyi-Sus Religion vs. Relationship by Vexic929

Equal Rights by HarmonicSonic Snarks by HarmonicSonic Tolerance by HarmonicSonic

Excuses, excuses by Ramen27 Tolerance? by Ramen27 Definition by Ramen27

Stand up by Ramen27 Morality vs Tolerance by Ramen27 Religion is NOT the problem by XxDiaLinnxX

Intelligence For All Beings by XxDiaLinnxX Inanimate objects do not commit crimes. by XxDiaLinnxX 'I have a degree' my ass. by XxDiaLinnxX

Burden-of-proof by XxDiaLinnxX Christianity and society by Colliequest Christianity Doesn't Promote Murder or Rape. by Unicornarama

Wait Till Marriage by Starlow-FTW I Support Modesty Stamp by DixieKristen Ain't nothin' wrong with it... by Pencilartguy

I Support Purity before marriage by Feesu-san Different Opinions - Stamp by Starrceline Rant: Gun Rights by Fragdog

Pro-gun stamp by Ramen27 NRA Stamp by MetalShadowOverlord Pile of Cells Stamp by MetalShadowOverlord

After all, I'm a clump too... by Porcelain-Requiem Equal rights by trappedspirit Stop worrying by trappedspirit

i love things simple by simplicity-fan American History Stamp by TheStampCollector History Stamp by TheStampCollector

American Nation-Neutral stamp by Clockwerk-chan Constitution fan by Ramen27 I support Liberty by Ramen27

Don't be naive. by Ramen27 Respect is EARNED stamp by a-stamp-account Heritage, Not Hate Stamp by KahunaSniper

Don't Tread On Me Stamp by KahunaSniper Salute Our Troops Stamp by KahunaSniper Stamp: Patience by delusional-dreams

Stamp: Love by delusional-dreams Stamp: Joy by delusional-dreams Stamp: Goodness by delusional-dreams

Stamp: Listener by delusional-dreams Light in Dark Places by delusional-dreams Words have Power by delusional-dreams

Stamp: Self Control by delusional-dreams Stamp: Be Brave by delusional-dreams Stamp: Everyone Needs Encouragement by starfire-wolf

Stamp: Always Believe in Yourself by starfire-wolf Stamp: That moment when... by starfire-wolf Stamp: Silent Heroes by starfire-wolf

Stamp: Good Worth Fighting For by Southrobin Stamp: The Loneliest People by Southrobin Stamp: Words of Encouragement by Southrobin

Stamp: Words of Encouragement by Southrobin Stamp: Live like its Heaven on Earth by Southrobin Stamp: No One Can Defeat by Southrobin

Stamp: Only Fear Itself by Southrobin Conscience Stamp by mylastel :thumb314189232:

Promote what you Love by Snuf-Stamps It's extremely disrespectful. by World-Hero21 I can't take you seriously if you use insults. by World-Hero21

Because You Can Now Be Punished For Fighting Back by Mintaka-TK :thumb467292091: Proud To Be Human by elizabethmuller

:thumb110476296: Equalist Stamp by Tandenfee MY FEELS, I CAN'T! by TR0LLHAMMEREN

Southern Pride by TheHylianHaunter Gadsden Flag stamp by picturefragments Old School Patriot Stamp by dA--bogeyman

Military Deviants Stamp by Military-Deviants I Am A Military lover STAMP by Cattarb :thumb87699065:

:thumb92122879: I get facts stamp by Pirate-Liz OCs Stamp by BowChickaBowWow

Pro-Life Stamp by AnnaTheDorkQueen Stamp - Second Amendment by MauserGirl War Stamp by necrophadian

I Love Guns Stamp by Its-An-Inferno Straight -n- Proud by Straight-Pride Proud Male by Dark-lil-Angel

I'm Straight and Proud stamp by Twilight-Witch Marriage by Valvador I Support Marriage by Rosenezz

Marriage Stamp by surfersquid Pro - Stamp by icedance4ever-stock Pro-Life Stamp by Tatooine92

Purity Stamp by MushuD Marriage Stamp by MushuD Hate Groups Stamp by VampsStock

No Excuse Stamp by VampsStock Pro-Het Stamp by pro-het-club

Not cute stamp by piratekit Love doesnt equal sex stamp by Narukami90

I think that's enough stamps, whoo! Thank you for viewing, and no, I am not sorry if anyone is offended.
Interests

Groups

Friends

Comments


Add a Comment:
 
:iconbobbyv94:
bobbyv94 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Sup
Reply
:iconcommanderhurtz:
Commanderhurtz Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Hai!
Reply
:iconbobbyv94:
bobbyv94 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Whats up?
Reply
:iconcommanderhurtz:
Commanderhurtz Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Currently chilling out, and you?
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconsneakyparagon:
SneakyParagon Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much for the watch!
Reply
:iconcommanderhurtz:
Commanderhurtz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Very welcome!
Reply
:iconhgn-da:
HGN-DA Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016
Hi there! ^^
Reply
:iconcommanderhurtz:
Commanderhurtz Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Heeey! How ya doin'?
Reply
:iconhgn-da:
HGN-DA Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2017
Not too bad, how are you?
Reply
Add a Comment: